It is water's instinct
to flow downstream
within some boundaries
and be named
as a river
but why some rivers
flow towards an ocean
knowing
they will get lost
and become unknown
without extremes?
why does a river need to
loose its self
like man has to lose his
to flow freely
into HIM?
maybe it's the ocean
who knows the answer..
..or maybe it's HIM.
A contest entry
- rivers flowing... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 25, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was an awesome take to the prompt! How he flows into us the same as a river has to combine itself with the ocean...deserving of a honorable mention. Blessings.
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thanks a lot for your good comments..God bless!!
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Humm..very curious tone you crafted of the words of your wonderful poem..love it..and my regards to the entry in my contest...
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thanks a lot for your comments on my poem..and thanks for the honour
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