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Splendor Break

Heart shatters; stunning

{-supernova-}

billions of shards
catch sun,
                    rainbow refraction...

  ...beauty


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A beautiful heartbreak
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  • Lady Michaella
    January 29, 2009
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    oo. i actually quite like this.. alot.
    well done
    gud entry!
    thanks for entering
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