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Solitaire

Animus puncured by ignorant blade;
cleaves black hole divide.


      Everytime I step outside
    I see the pain refracted 


              Everytime I open my eyes
            I see my world subtracted -


from all the reasons we stand on this world
  from all the people who care.
from all the days we spent together
  from the water and the air..





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Echoes of the Soul

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  • The FaeQueen
    January 27, 2009

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    This is so deep! just the way i like it. it is full of emotions which gives the poem life!
    Thank you!