Oh God
you invented the reality
and to know the truth of it,
devised a fallacy
the contrast
is thought provoking,
by labeling me to know
the fact
the lessons of the untruth
were generated,
blessing a sinful life,
you devised me a model of your faith
Oh God...
A contest entry
- PICTURE INSPIRED POEMS by ennovy.
750 points, ended January 26, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very expressive in your beliefs... and a great poem for the pic. I love the opening stanza really pulled in the rest... Well done.
Congrats on the shiney
Delila
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Just some very beautiful words...expression and it fits well with the picture....thank you for entering our contest...novy & Brazos
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Very beautiful.
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Very self serving, I like it!
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An interesting perspective that makes me wonder: How do we know we are faithful if we never fail or falter? It is good to have a model of faith to follow. May I suggest a slight change in the wording of line 8, to read "the lessons of the untruth..." to keep the tenses in unity. Peace and best wishes in the contest. Rhonda
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THIS, my precious friend, is GOLD. It is beautifully written and most certainly befits the picture. More importantly, it reveals the fact that God blesses us, despite our sinful nature, and makes us over into His image filled with faith. Praise the Lord! It is so good to read something new by my dear friend.
Much luv & hugs, BonnieQ 
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