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Emptiness



There's far more beauty in silence
when there's less of you to appreciate
the dull lack-of-hum and awing reprieve,
the silent requiem for a lost soul
who never wanted to be exorcised,
and only wanted to paint the world
white.


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  • ExtinctOxygen
    January 23, 2009

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    raw.

    I dont like silence, I never have it drives me to the depths of insanity-

    but you made see silense as the stunnig thing it can be.

    you just get more and more amazing.


  • StarEyes
    January 23, 2009

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    Chelli,

    Are you ok Darling? I love this one, but I have to admit, that it has me wondering...

    You know where to find me, should you need me.

    I love you.

    Ek is lief vir jou altyd

    Mom