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My Fairy,ferry me in love,life long!

Like the cool showers in summer
you look like golden spark slimmer!
Like rising waves of the excited sea,
your beauty blossoms sky high,
Shy of my playful looks staring by.

Your whispers in love,in my ears,
Crisp and brisk, exhilerate me my dear!
Lovely hair,silky smooth,
Dancing in the playful wind, sooths
My mind heated up,misssing you long!

My arms search for you in my embrace!
My nerves excited with blood that race
My Fairy, you are with crest of beauty!
We two drench in moonlight,joined as one:
My Fairy, ferry me in love, life long!

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poem dedicated to my friend Sue!

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  • AnaelCathetelEcanus silver member
    March 4, 2009
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    Beautiful dedication. Such love and passion within your words, so stunning!


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    January 24, 2009
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    Thank for the dedication and the beautiful poem. I will treasure both.

    Love
    Sue x