I’m dancing around
with my head in a rainbow
the clouds have all cleared
in your beautiful brown eyes
I make a statement
for all ears to hear
my words of love
have never been more clear
You bat an eyelash
like a spark in the night
I am touched to the soul
in the beauty of your light
Author notes
Karl Weiss - Topaz
A contest entry
- "celebrate, celebrate, dance to the music!" round 1 of 4 by iamthebeatles.
650 points, ended February 5, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is breathtaking! Absolutely stunning words you have written. Its so romantic and beautiful! I can't possibly pick out my favorite part, it all just sits so perfectly together. Wonderful fantastic poetry.
cassie
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Sparkling brown eyes
hold onto those that are green
Dancing on clouds
and feeling so serene
Happiness found me
the day you walked in
And our love, my darling
can take me for a spin
Your words, darling brought those to light.
Joann
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Thank you my little kitten, such a beautiful mind my love.
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