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Exiting Sickness

Nothing more can be said.

You can not confuse,

Or compete,

The pure imagination.

And I know

That you know

Every truth is that of one creation.

All those feuds,

Dimensions,

And the liars,

They are more than you can fathom.

We must all

Let it free.

Let the exit become

Of a sickness...

An illness...

A common rape of the mind.

It is something that happens

To us all

Without questions...

Without comments...

If you sit,

And you stare,

Perhaps you will gain

An honest dedication.

But I know

that you know,

One mind can only begin

The sick soft preparations.

So tell me,

Do you see

All lives that are ending...?

If you do,

Then I say

You are stronger than ever before.

Back when I was...

Little...

Small like...

An exiting sickness...

A fantasy...

Author notes

A person's imagination is very powerful. In fact, it can sometimes be so powerful it literally alters reality. In some cases, even in the past with myself, an imagination can be so strong it will make you sick. Not only mentally, but emotionally and physically as well.

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  • n0714251
    February 11

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    It sounds real 'Do you see All lives that are ending...? If you do,Then I say You are stronger than ever before'. I feel like this poet is talking to me. He lifts-up my fighting spirit


  • Beauty Of Silence
    January 28

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    this was good. it was really different and unique. i like how you phrased it, how you put the words together. it was intense


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    January 27

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    this has great rhthm, it stomps in my head its very cleverly constructed i like it very much, greadt video too


  • couldbeworse
    January 23

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    We must all

    Let it free.

    Let the exit become

    Of a sickness...

    An illness...

    A common rape of the mind.

    brilliant! loved it. unfortunately I have dial up so no youtube watching for me


  • DeadPuppet
    January 23

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    I feel like in my mind i can relate to this...

    Back when I was...
    Little...
    Small like...
    An exiting sickness...
    A fantasy...

    Its just that i don't know how...


  • Deathless1
    January 23

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    i'm not sure what your new fixation with imagination and the human mind is.
    but i like it. i don't have any room to talk.

    the video wouldn't load for me, so i will be commenting on it later when i get home.


    • The Cube
      January 23
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      Thanks and trust me you'll love the short video. Its only like a 1:30 long

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