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11.18.08

Build it up,
this barrier I've grown
to love.

The world looks real
behind dirt and paint covered
hands.

Author notes

This was an ink stain in my World History notes for a long while.
I want to add more, before I lose it.

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  • SilverSoul
    January 23, 2009
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    short but intriguing

    I eagerly await to see how this wall progresses.
    Also, I like the choice in background. The text is almost lost in it like weathered etchings on sandstone. History writen on the "wall" slowly being erased as time, and the wall, progresses...