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To Dance Alone

You twirl round and around
surrounded by some many people
They what curiously, wondering if you'll fall down

You've stayed so strong for so long, they know
And your at the edge of breaking
You've stayed so strong for so long
Alone so far gone from your partner

You dance until your feet are sore
You dance until they bleed
You dance until they scream
No more please, no more

So painful it is to watch this beauty
How it hurts to watch her fall

So beautifuly she dances
So beautifuly she falls

You've been so strong for so long
This is as any good a time to fall
So surrounded so known
What a sad story they know
What a sad story you live

You dance unitl your feet are sore
You dance until they bleed
You dance until they scream
No more please, no more

Author notes

When you know something won't be the same
Sometimes you're world falls apart..

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