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Just 'Hear' this!

There was a Dear,
Whose ear sensed a Bear,
Dear froze with fear,
Bear came near.

Negotiated Dear,
"I have Beer,
with which you can cheer."

Bear changed his mind's gear,
Bear drank beer.
and also tried to tear the dear,
Escaped Dear,
By reminding Bear,
That Bear forgot to wear his underwear.

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  • karatekid
    February 10
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    very funny and good rhyming good luck

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 23
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    Great job. The rhyming is cool is this.
    Thanks for entering; good luck.
    Brian