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Feeling Love

Sitting alone yet someone with me,
seems like just here....smiling she.

Initially, this feeling made me conscious,
but now, I dont care,
coz one too busy to enjoy her presence....
....here, there and everywhere.

Yes, she is 'that' girl,
Why?
Coz she sees me and her face glows like a pearl.

She never laughs at me,
coz she laughs with me.

Pink, green....eh..more than 'VIBGYOR',
Every color suits her,
No, she suits every color.

And then,
She suits me,
I suit her.

I dont care,
If she turns ugly from angel fair,
What kills me is her long....long silent stare.

She is always by my side,
she is caring,
Why is it so difficult to say that 'old thing'?

But still desperate to utter,
How very much one likes...loves her.


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Raw english but pure feelings.

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  • parijat
    June 28
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    Really nice...hope u will get someone who will love u.