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A story i wrote..

there was once this girl anmed veronica
she was 14 years old an had, had a pretty tough life
bein bashed by her dad for 8 years
bein sexually assulted a 3 diffrent times
by the age of 13 she come up with a way to deal with the pain
she turned to cuttin her wrists
one night she met a girl named lola an fell inlove with her..
from that day on she stopped cuttin she had soemthin to be happy about.

One night her an her beloved lola got into a massive fight.
Veronica didnt know how to deal with it
she slit her wrists up bad,
but it didnt take the pain away.
she overdosed but knew it wouldnt do anythin as she had done it before
the only other thing she could think of was hanging her self or sliting her neck.

her friends could tell she wasnt well
an tried talkin her out of it but nothin could help..

that night veronica sat there for ages just thinking
so many thoughts running through her head
"was this the right thing to do"
"maybe things will get better"
"what about my friends an family"

but then she recieved a text message from lola
saying some pretty horrific stuff
at that point veronica new it was the right thing to do.

at 9 oclock that night when her family were all asleep
veronica made her way out to there garage
where she found a large piece of rope an a steel pole on the roof to tie it to
after 20 minutes of settin up veronica put the rope around her neck
AND JUMPED

This is alls i got so far, shall add more onto it later

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  • ly

    Ausome hun
    i feel like,, sorrowfull ?
    some word like that ayee.
    xx