Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Sweet Southern Belle

A sweet southern belle with an eloquent poise,
embracing the hope that tradition enjoys.
With style and charm like a soft woven quilt,
the character of grace rather carefully built.

Author notes

Kevin Pace WordsDoMatter

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • lindaburns gold member
    March 3

    Edit | Reply
    My go-to people disagree on whether this needs a pronoun. The English major says it does. The high school Honors English teacher says it doesn’t. It IS pretty. Thanks for entering.


  • myrataal silver member
    January 25

    Edit | Reply

    I grinned reading your comment to the hostess ...

    for yes: I too see the optimism in your poem. And: it worked well for me.




  • dustookie2
    January 23

    Edit | Reply
    I liked how your lines rolled sweetly from my lips...I had images of my daughter Belle so your words danced around in my head softly as they merged into my thoughts. An good take on the prompt very nicely penned. thank you for the read.


  • Cannonsfire
    January 23

    Edit | Reply
    Rhyme done very well here, I hadn't thought of her as being sweet so it's a different take. Thank you C


    • WordsDoMatter
      January 24
      Edit | Reply

      there I go

      being the eternal optimist again... oh well, it works for me - thanks - Kevin

1 - 5 of 5