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I feel Lifeless

Empty.hollow
I've been stripped
bare

abandoned.lifeless
no love left to
spare

emotionless.broken
my heart beyond
repair

depressed.hurt
of the true you I'm now
aware

gloomy.tragic
I'll never trust again I
swear

retribution.revenge
I advise you
beware

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