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And the floor shook

My sanity rolled under the bed,
settling amongst the dust.
And when searching
all I could see were twisted lies
and grievances
whipped into a frenzy
by the passing storm.

Author notes

Picture prompt.
http://cas.hamptonu.edu/centerinfo/photo-album/ScienceGraphics/images/volcano.jpg



Ugh, such a beautiful picture but so damn hard to write for. I kinda manged though. I think.

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  • Tristan Storm
    January 23, 2009

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    Well I think you did very well ! I definately wouldnt have had a clue what to write!

    Congrats on clinching the HM

    Hugz
    Tristan


  • Ademon
    January 23, 2009
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    You did very well.


  • Cannonsfire
    January 23, 2009
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    You did a good job hun C