My sanity rolled under the bed,
settling amongst the dust.
And when searching
all I could see were twisted lies
and grievances
whipped into a frenzy
by the passing storm.
Author notes
Picture prompt.
http://cas.hamptonu.edu/centerinfo/photo-album/ScienceGraphics/images/volcano.jpg
Ugh, such a beautiful picture but so damn hard to write for. I kinda manged though. I think.
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 QUICKIE PICTURE PROMPT by Ademon.
950 points, ended January 23, 2009, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Blah-fish - Constructive criticism is appreciated
Comments
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Well I think you did very well ! I definately wouldnt have had a clue what to write!
Congrats on clinching the HM
Hugz
Tristan


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You did very well.


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You did a good job hun
C





