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Poppy Fields of Oz

She, with grey-tinged eyes,
Loved something inside
Behind those pupil windows
The poppy fields of oz reside. . .

As fruit is an adaptation
Of plant to animal,
So is a plant's effect
To the mind and spirit

The storm becomes too strong,
Nodding out of her energy body
She wanders outside the clouds
Of ego, into the plant's tears

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