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Sometimes

Sometimes
I look back
And take time
To remember me as I was

Sometimes
I sit
To carefully unwind
The knots of the long burried dreams

Sometimes
I close my eyes
To see the ever persistent
Still unseen, my soul

Sometimes
I shut my ears
To the loud shrieks outside
And hear the echos of past

Sometimes
I let my hair loose
On a windy evening
To feel the touch of wind

Sometimes
I sing aloud
And act stupid
Not worrying about the rest

Sometimes, just sometimes
I fall in love with life again!

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  • dieu.
    July 11
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    nope sorry.


  • dieu.
    July 9
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    sorry, no.


  • Kristine86
    April 3

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    I like it!! Sometimes just a moment to yourself is all you need to appreciate life! Good job, thanks for entering and good luck!