I Lay Weeping
©copyright 2005 Bonita M Quesinberry, R.C.
I was crying when suddenly awoken,
blood spilling from a heart so broken
as Gabriel repeated, "It's far too late,
for each sin they refused to abate.
You must stand fast and hear all the angels hark
as Jesus weeps o'er earth in the dark.
I lay weeping, not wanting to even move,
aware there's nothing more I can do.
It is done; and, I'd said all that could be said,
while praying it saved them from twice dead.
Alas, they maligned God's Word spoken so true,
left unsure I'd reached even a few.
I was crying when suddenly awoken,
bitter tears o'er Satan's vile tokens;
though Gabriel assured me, "You are secure.
Rise and look away from Satan's lures;
continue to stand fast and do as you've done:
for it will keep you strong in God's Son.
I weep still for their loss but now understand.
They can hear words only smooth and bland;
for it was written that they will not repent,
despite overt fury God has sent.
I comprehend: I must continue to speak,
for my strength is in God's Truth I keep.
I lay weeping but would do as I was told
thus arose to a room very cold.
Words flowed through my mind as I turned up the heat,
and swiped at tears; for I'd not be beat,
as there are those who haven't read what I write.
God's might is mine and I'm in His light.
For them I weep, yet shake their dust from my feet,
sorely aware of their soon defeat;
for each who deny, live and die Satan's child;
lukewarm, unruly, utterly wild.
They live loosely, thus will die outside God's Law;
despite having been warned of each flaw.
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A contest entry
- ...With Urgency... by Desire.
1221 points, ended January 29, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This was a true vision, an end day warning: please heed and repent.
Comments
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Glad you
won a Gold for this Bonnie! Yes, we all need have a sense of urgency as He's not far off & many are in need of Truth & repentance. Unfortunately many will have to suffer for their non-compliance to His law & will have to endure much before & if ever they will turn around. He told us all about this but sadly many refuse to heed His written word. Keep on keeping on in Him.
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Ah, Bonnie
a wonderful write. Do not revise - leave as is. There is urgency and straight forward direction contained in this poem. I will again return to it. This is not a one-time read. Hugs to you. Frans
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Thank you so much, dearest Frans, for the uplifting words. I need them from time to time, especially when the going is more than rough.
Luv & hugs, BonQ
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Really liked the rhyming.
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Nice poem...
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well done
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So full of emotion, I could feel it, breath it.
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This poem is a visionary one of warning and rescue, redeeming the time for His will and purpose. One scary thought to ponder is 'to whom much is given, much will be required', a sobering thought to be sure. May we reach out to others in this world while time and opportunity allows. Thanks for sharing this inspirational write my friend.
Brother Dennis
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Indeed, my dear Brother, much has been given me and much is required; but, it truly is not scary, wearying sometimes, even exhausting at times, and it means Satan is relentlessly attacking me. Praise the Lord, He is ever here to protect me and to provide the necessary breaks (R & R) needed to refuel and push on again. In these days, it can seem all is done in vain but it is that continuing to warn that keeps us ever mindful to remain strong when we'd almost rather shut up and give in. Thank you so much for the encouragement! And, prayers.
Much luv & hugs, SisBon 
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I dunno if i could be very constructive with this piece.
There are places where the wording is hard to get the tongue around but changing it would mean changing what you have written and I don't think it should be re-written.
It was wonderfully written and compelling (and a good reminder). It was also reassuring for me because I identify with the narrator in this poem. This was something I needed to read. Kinda strange since I don't go looking through poetry at 3am when I should be sleeping.
I would like if you message me an explanation about this being an end day warning. I mean, I get the idea. I'm being specifically vague here but i want to know if there was something specific that brought this out.
Anyway, great poem.
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The specifics that prompted the Holy Spirit to awaken me in such a manner was the fact I readily discerned that people do not want God's Truth, which I speak, and that spells destruction for them; for they prefer deadly smooth words. This breaks my heart and, moreso, when the Spirit confirmed, "It is done, they will not repent." -- exactly what God said of the people in this last church age. I hope I've answered your question sufficiently, dear one.
Much luv in Christ, BonnieQ
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this is deep... very, very deep. oh my. wow. that's really in-depth.
that's all i can say... this was deep.
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The truth
This is a picture that can be seen in these words.
Alone..
So beautifully given.
Thank you for this.
Love Peace,
campanaro
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Thank you so much, Campanaro, for the very kind review.
BonnieQ
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The truth
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Ahhh The Prophetess speaks. She speaks with vision, clarity, love, tenderness and authority. This reminds me of a time in my life when I felt I could in someway relate to Jeremiah " the weeping prophet". I felt that emotion in this, the weeping prophet, crying out for the children of the earth with love. This is a beautiful poem Bonnie and I am so glad it got the Gold recognition it deserved. Well done sweet Sister, WELL DONE! Jo
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You said it, I didn't!
Normally, I get accused of being a "false" one yet I've never claimed to be one. Oh, well, we know how that goes. Thank you so much, my sweet Jo, for the very uplifting review and encouragement. A little angel, whom I discovered and uncovered, has been featuring "I Lay Weeping," because she felt more people needed to read and heed the warning. Heaven only knows how many times she has done it over the past week! Praise the Lord for all the help this Handmaiden can get.
Much love, hugs and prayers, SisBon 
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this is spiritual food and its cuisine is delectable but as i recall this is just who you are. i like the structure of this and the profundity of is surpasses itself. this is truly a winner.
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Hi Queenie! Long time no see! Thank you so much for the uplifting words AND for remembering that this is what I do for our Father and His Christ. So good to hear from you.
Much love & hugs, BonnieQ
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very beauiful, love it ^^
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Hmm...Interesting and great.
That's probably a weird way to phrase it, but that's the impression I have at the close of this poem. With regards to constructive criticism, I think you could tighten up the rhyme by rearranging syllables here and there, but that's all rather inconsequential.
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that was deep..made me look at myself and see if im living rught.
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Thank you, Priscilla; that was God's point, to drive one to look at self and what self is doing for or against our Lord.
Luv in Christ, BonnieQ
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My
And as the 144,000 ascend into the arms of God so shall it be.
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Thank you for commenting, Bob. It would be wonderful if that number would increase because of people suddenly repenting.
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Wow! that's amazing! It grabs you and doesn't let go. ^_^ i loved it
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Thank you, Andy, for such kind comments. The event itself rather did not let go of me.
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Wow
Usually I'm not one for religious writes but this one is amazing. It's not too preachy or overdone as most are it has great description and imagery and kept me hooked from beginning to end. That's a great write. : )
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Thank you for such an encouraging review, one that doesn't often come from those who do not like spiritual writes. Perhaps, it is due to the fact it relates a true event in my life? Still, thank you so much.
Luv & hugs, BonnieQ
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Excellent progression
You take us with you from Gabriel's "too late...Jesus is weeping" through to your own tears, shed in concern for the unrepentant. Thanks for the admonition to stay "in His light" whatever else is happening around us. A blessing to read.
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Thank you so much, Sue, for "getting it" and knowing we must stay in Christ's Light as well as continue speaking God's Truth . . . despite it often seeming in vain. Luv & hugs, BonnieQ
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not the least...
bt surprised this is a gold trohpy winner, this ispowerful..very moving..flawless rhyme and flow..wow my friend..excellent!
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Awww, thank you dear one. It was an incredibly moving experience. When the Holy Spirit moves one, it is vivid and totally unforgettable.
Luv & hugs, BonQ
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Great write from a very beautiful and special soul!
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Beautifully written bya a sweet soul...
Be blessed in all you do.
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"God's might is mine and I'm in His light."
What blessed assurance, to know, through no merit of our own but our trust in Christ, that we can speak these words!
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oh now what should one say to something as beautiful as this.. You really reached out and touched the reader with your words.. in some places they were just to full of emotion they just brought tears to my eyes.. and then there were other places where your words were just so intense, it was really amazing to read this.. the softness and loving emotion that you wrote this piece with really shines through.. thank you very much for sharing something so beautiful.. a well deserved gold!!!
Angel
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Thank you, dear Angel, for your very kind review and uplifting words. I pray that many people take this vision to heart, for the time is incredibly short and moving so fast that makes even my head spin.
Much love & hugs, BonnieQ
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wow a wonderful poem so deep and powerful congratulations on your shinymaralisa
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eye-opening
You have captured my attention and stirred my heart with this poem of warning. Time and opportunity is surely slipping away from the untold millions who have not made their peaice with the true and living GOD. We must redeem the time allotted us, seeking our own safe passage to the eternal plane but we must also reach out to those around us that are perishing in ignorance. God help us all to reach these precious souls, souls that Jesus died for. Thank you for sharing this thoughtful write dear Sister.
Brother Dennis.
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Thank you so much, dearest Brother. There is that part of me that remembers "It is done" and wonders what is the point; then, I remember that because God said "they will not repent" means they could; so, we must continue to reach out to warn and guide if they will allow us.
Much love & hugs, SisBon
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Beautiful!!
Definitely worthy of the Gold, and the Oscar nomination!!!
Wonderful wording that will deeply touch many!
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Oscar nomination? For "I Lay Weeping? O. . . kay, I guess. What Oscar nomination? I have no idea what you are talking about, Luv. Care to enlighten me?
Luv & hugs, SisBon
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Now I know why Desire chose this one for the AP Oscar! this is truly amazing! What a great read. Something in this touched me as well... That is hard to do.. You did an outstanding job on this one!
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: I Lay Weeping
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times~ I am Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest You took the prompt and ran with it~ Bravo!!
When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~ I have to say- when I read Your words~ what instantly came to me was mattered not what religion or walk I held but the energy itself- the emotions and message brought forth touched~ now I had to get through the first stanza for my eyes swelled~ Each stanza was like lightning bolt of energy- I had to stop each time- There are people from all walks of Life- who make choices which I respect for this contest asked for Power- based on prompt- and this piece You have brought forth knocked me off my chair; the energy just hit me so hard- I'm impressed!! I am quite sensitive to energy even from one word-- one can feel the intensity and I kept being shown this was a necessity- needed to be heard- needed to be written not for the trophy but like the prompt called for- to plant a seed even in one person~ I stepped outside my shell and read this from a perspective say of someone who may have doubts for there are entrants who may~ If I did not Believe in anything- what seed would this plant and what came back to me was- a seed to seek further- which is a good thing indeed
Love the direction You took this quote Hopefully my words make some sense Powerful verse and message You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
I comprehend: I must continue to speak,
for my strength is in God's Truth I keep.
Empowered Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit
also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
with much love and light~ Desire~*~
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Thank you so much, Desire, for sharing your feelings about "I Lay Weeping." The morning the event occured was quite emotional for me, as well. Also, thank you for seeing through the guise of placing it in a contest, for my intent is for more people to read and, as you say, hopefully they will re-examine their lives and the directions they have taken before it is too late.
I know your judging of the contest will be a difficult one; there are so many fine poets here and, alas, I don't consider myself one of them. I am simply God's Warrior Handmaiden doing my duty for Him.
Much love in Christ and may you be so blessed that you lose count.
BonnieQ
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Beautifully written sweet soul...
Be blessed in all you do.
Tony
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Thank you so much, Tony. The experience was unlike any of the visions God has given me, for Gabriel's words broke my heart, as I know it breaks God's and Christ's.
Love in Christ, BonnieQ
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This is such a powerful prophetic poem. What an intense experience you had with the Lord!
Bonnie you can truly say that "God's might is mine and I'm in His light." Your words are true and the vision is so appropriate and timely for this age in which we live.
We can only pray for the mercy and salvation of God to be poured out on this sorry world. If only all could have ears to hear what the Spirit is say in these last days.
I love dear heart.
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Thank you for the encouragement, Sis; and, you are so right: all we can do, the most powerful thing we can do, is pray God's mercy on the blind and deaf. I do so all the time, for I would love to see God and Christ not lose one single human being.
Luv ya tons with ferret and puppy dog kisses!
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So true.
This is so true especially now for me. I do tire and get frustrated over people who pretend to love God but their actions say something different. This is a timely piece written well.
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This was a waking vision for me back in 2005; but, as you say, dear Cousin, it is just as timely today, if not more so as time draws to a close. I know and understand well your weary frustration. Sometimes we want to just shake them until their teeth rattle and say, "Don't you get it?"
Much love and hugs, SisBon
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Why would you want to revise this? It is awesome! Prophetic... Nice rhyme and flow but the message is outstanding!
Blessings
Much love
Frogz~
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Truth. Light. Understanding. It seems we come to the light so slowly from the darkness of physical sense, Bonnie. As in times of old, mankind does not understand, and that is the key word, "understand," for God's law is the law of love, so much more than the counterfeit we try to make of it in a material world of haves and have not. The significance of seeing through the Spirit requires sacrifice of what we depend on in a cognizance of mortal existence. We either have not the understanding to relinquish it yet, or we do not want to. The lie and the liar always goes down screaming it has a right to persist and to deny life in good, because it's only existence is finite as shadow and suffering...from dust to dust. To live and move and have our being in Spirit does indeed require that we shake the dust from our feet!
I have a friend who is always telling me Jesus' words, "to come out from among them (of the world) and be separate." And it's been a slow process. I understand the tears and the hope in glimmerings of what you speak in a very individual way.
Love to you,
Karen
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Ah, my sweet Sis Karen, it is sooo good to hear from you. I love the depth of your review and the point you make that we must make a sacrifice of this world, to separate selves from it in order to live as God requires. I just wish people understood that it is not as hard as they seem to think, for we serve such a simple God with simple requirements. What hurts the most, for me, is that time is running out and I find it difficult to convey the true urgency in repenting before it's too late.
By the way, did you notice I'd been using some of the "Holy Humor" you sent to me for our TSaS broadcasts? Those were awesome and I'll have another one for next Sabbath.
Much love and hugs, SisBon
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