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If I Fall Will You Chatch Me?




in the dead of night i falter
memories flood unrelenting
flash back after flash back
swarming like a mass confusion

breathing only prolongs life
and this does not suit me.

i question my sanity
it has failed me many times
every turn becomes a tumble
my bones are aching

days become laborious
and life leeks away.

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • LovelyTraces
    January 23

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    Wow, you took that picture and ran with it! This is truly a work of art. My favorite part was:

    "days become laborious
    and life leeks away."

    That was totally genius. Great interpretation of the picture, and good luck in the contest!


  • Ademon
    January 23
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    You got all of that from that picture?!?!?! Holy Moley....