I tried to pull away
tried to fight today
but he makes it worse
and i know that pain hurts
But dad's personal [problem]
makes me want to just give in
the tears are streaming,
and my heart is screaming.
Oh God NO, daddy did it again
ripped my soul into pieces, of {Pain}
I cried so hard, on hands and knees
begging daddy stop please.
But daddy's personal [problem] never stops
Until he breaks every part and piece of my heart.
Author notes
Issue: Informal. A personal problem or emotional disorder:
A contest entry
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wow .. This WAS amazing. Very well written, so sad, but great job (:
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this is really sad, but an amazing write.
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I think this truely deep,
well written.
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Owwww hun i am so sorry. I cant stop the tears from falling. Your words have hit me so hard. This is a heartbreaking piece of work. A brilliant write, so full of pain, so full of emotion. I can relate to this so well. I am so sorry that you have had to go through such pain. It is amazing how you have almost excused your fathers behaviour by putting it down to his problems. He had no right to violate you in anyway and no amount of problems a person has can excuse that. I am so sorry. i can relate so well to what you have bee through and if you ever need to talk i am here for you hun
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Sad piece you have penned here.
Thank you for your entry.
Juls
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Your word is .......
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Good Luck
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