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The Rataplans

Our rataplans are to fall inconspicuously
From the grey mother sky
To pitter-patter the conversation banter
Of pissing angels from heaven-11

Bicycle day rain, won't you fall your name
The acid rain of open-eyed wet visuals
Which auspice me rapid third eye movement

The storm plant, Papaver Somniferum, be blessed
Upon the pavement I saw a rare sight indeed
A drowned snake amidst the drown worms
Its death I became and thus alive so much more

Author notes

No, I did not really see a drowned snake. I hope to. Perhaps a writer's scenario becomes a moment in their life due to the psychic magnetism which prevails! Or. . .not.

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