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He's...

He's something i don't know.
He's something  so right.
He makes me feel alive
In the dead of night.

He's nothing like before,
He's nothing I'll forget.
He's like the nicotine
In a thousand cigarettes.

He's what I want now.
He's what I'll always need.
And without him here,
I'll never be freed.

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Okay, this is how one guy at my school makes me feel. I dont even know him that well. I'm just hooked to him and I dont know why! Does this happen only to me?

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  • demon.known
    May 21

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    Ohhhhh, wow, I have a guy like that too. It sucks too because they just stick in your mind and as much as you try to forget them or get over them they keep popping up. I like the
    "He's like the nicotine
    In a thousand cigarettes."
    Nicely written.


  • XxXSilentlyDyingXxX
    January 24

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    It dosent only happen to
    you cuz i have the same
    prob
    cuz there is this
    guy and he has a girlfriend
    but he ignors
    me
    but i hope yours willl work better
    then mine
    By the way your really good!


    • aj.vamp
      January 28
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      Thank you. Sorry about that whole guy with a gf, that's happened to me before also. As you see I finally got over it. (after a few months) I hope yours works out too.