wasn't hungry.
but you,
uttered something around
glutton suitcases -
"go to hell"
on a killing tree,
I did.
~~~
Author notes
the epiglottis is a flap in your throat that prevents you from inhaling food or drink.
In a list
A contest entry
- 18 words by Lavender Butterfly.
510 points, ended January 22, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
of course that's how you're supposed to feel.
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Cassie-la=poet=mucho talent
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gasp
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You amaze. This is breathlessly stunning. Talent? You're soaking in it! When you are the next Great American Poet, I will say: "I knew her when . . . "
Garrison
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Oh my! I see why this poem won a gold cup! You have the gift of penning such strength with so few words. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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You have an AWESOME picture... dp... thingy.
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congrats on your gold sister
and wow -
"wasn't hungry."
I loved that opening line, especially without an 'I'.
"on a killing tree,
I did."
You're so smart.
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Jessica
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Very clever and creative. Love the sarcasm!
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the wordplay is clever. the title is amazing.
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Thank you!
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love the sarcasm built into these words, made me chuckle lol
C
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Thanks!
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