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Animals

        in coronation
              I became someone
          you couldn't love
                a traitor

          we made love
                in a maintenance closet
              on the 18th floor
                  we stopped
          because it hurt you

              your hat
                      has a speckled lizard
                on it
                        it comes and goes
                in cycles
                    in cycles baby
              you chaGRIN like please,
                  but when you take off my
              cashmere sweater
                    this, we have
    becomes sinister
            a sort of sonata
    you're not supposed to dance to
                your
    two blue beads I extract from their shell
            then I take them and put them inside my
        ocelot eyes
                  the world is just full of cats

            quoi ca? quoi ca?
            where do we go now?
        if you love me you will
    take off your pelican shirt
          you say,
                love is left handed anyways,
            and sip from your herbal
                beverage of choice
              legs crossed;
                  railroad ties

          well maybe we're relatives
                because we're both cousins to
            the cold
                Kruos squeeze

                        cruel dalmation
                        acquaintance
                              cloud finger
                            rule

Author notes


This is one part of three in what I'm conveniently calling "the napkin poems."

I came home to Cincinnati from Chicago a few weeks ago and the bus was almost an hour early-- an hour before my brother and ride home got out of school. So I milled about the nearby Tower Place Mall and eventually found my way to Netherland Plaza, a four or five star hotel. I wound my way up the ornate staircases past grand ballrooms, opulent restaurants and a convention hall until I reached my destination on the second floor, the toilet. I noticed upon leaving the restroom that the paper towels provided were quite nice. They were inscribed with the logo "NP" at the head and the address on the bottom. So I grabbed a stack and now back in Chicago have taken to inscribing poetry on them.

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