Face raw and red from the tears
My fingers shoved far down my throat
Throwing up my disgusting words into the toilet
They belong there just like our relationship...just like me
Caring ways pushed aside, trust thrown away
Impossible to overcome the jealous rage we each hold inside
Our love torn into shreds by constant fighting
Each over dramatic arguments we have separates us more, every angry word adds to the wall between us
Emotions are ruined beyond repair, how much pain can 2 people take?
Sorry can only be said so many times, meant even less..after awhile it becomes old
Importance of staying together suddenly seems it wouldnt hurt so bad
Take a step back and realize all that we have isnt working...nothing stays good for long
So throw out lust mistaken for love and flush down all the memories of us and how we used to be
Theres nothing left to salvage when you hate someone as much as you love them
Hope you like it...if not well F**K you lol
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wow
this is rlly good, i loved it, its amazing =] sad v.v but amazing ^-^ poem vise
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thank you
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this is so sad but i couldnt stop reading it, its amazing <3
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ty
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i loved it!
great conveying of your emotions.
throwing up words, that is beautiful.
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i rele like this poem.... how i feel and act right now? it hurts to know everything you worked hard to get is thrown away by some ass
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thanks..ya it does....
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no problem honeyy
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i rele like this poem.... how i feel and act right now? it hurts to know everything you worked hard to get is thrown away by some ass
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Thir is really great!
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thanks!
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aww amazzzinggg!! :)
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tysm!
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Dang.
This is hella sad (remember me?) this really is well written. I see why you've won all those damn trophies. I hope that one day i'll be able to write as well as you. I admire great poems and poets.
Take a step back and realize all that we have isnt working...nothing stays good for long
So throw out lust mistaken for love and flush down all the memories of us and how we used to be
Theres nothing left to salvage when you hate someone as much as you love them
That reminds me of some of the shit ive been through. Its so well witten. Kudos.
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yes i remember you, thanks 4 ur sweet comments babe....awwww
u allready are an amazing writer! i love ur poems!
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Damn thisi s gr8...its perfect for its intent if the intent is for the hated person to read it lol
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thanks lol yes
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aww sweetie this is amazing but so sad... i sorry.
but ya u betray so much emotion and idk Throwing up my disgusting words into the toilet
They belong there just like our relationship thats deep.
i love u buches
* always here if u need me babe
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its okay, i love you too babe so much! glad u liked it..n i kno u are n its means alot
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They belong there just like our relationship...just like me - really powerful line.
So throw out lust mistaken for love and flush down all the memories of us and how we used to be
Theres nothing left to salvage when you hate someone as much as you love them
- these two lines are just breath-taking. the way they are phrased, the message they send, just everything about them hits so hard.
it was a PERFECT way to end a great poem!
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that means alot. ty im glad u liked it, those are sum of my fav lines too...
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DaMn...DiS iS hEllA dEeP!!u SpEaK dA tRuTh In DiS!!
i LuVd Da WOlE tHiNg BuT mY mOsT fAvOrItEsT LiNeS wAs
"Take a step back and realize all that we have isnt working...nothing stays good for long
So throw out lust mistaken for love and flush down all the memories of us and how we used to be
Theres nothing left to salvage when you hate someone as much as you love them"
i KaN rElaTe SoO MuCh!!GrEaT jOb!!...
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thankxxxxx
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you just basically took the situation i'm in and wrote down to the T. i can completely relate. wonderful!
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thank you
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Face raw and red from the tears
My fingers shoved far down my throat
Throwing up my disgusting words into the toilet
They belong there just like our relationship...just like me
oh my gosh babe we so have not talked in for eva, im sorry on my half abut that!
this poem was filled with so much damn emotion not a bad thing but my gosh babe wow!!!
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im here if you wanna talk && you should know this by now, im sorry for whatever is going on
i love you so much ...xoxoxox
head up
your 2ed wiffyy[lol] Vanna
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i kno ive missed you so much, its ok. wow thanks i love you too babe! tons and tons! if u got a cell we could txt sumtime? up to you
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sue thing babe
&& jea we should text
i dont have the cellie with me my brother has it but ill give you the #
&& when i do have it we can text it upp hehehe
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yay and okay
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