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[ So if you love me ]

So if you love me
Let me go
And run away before I know
My heart is just too dark to care
I can't destroy what isn't there
Deliver me into my fate
If I'm alone I cannot hate

My smile was taken long ago

If I can change I hope I never know

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  • Nobodysboy
    February 2
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    Oh man, don't be hating there Patty,, doesn't pay anyway darlin


  • HereComesTheSun
    February 1

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    short sweet and to the point. lovely i really enjoyed the line "If I'm alone I cannot hate" becuase it is the truth
    thanks for entering


  • Lisa.
    January 31
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    wow thats so cute keep up the good work and good luck in my contest