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My Promise....

All My life I’ve been looking for you in a place
All my life hiding the truth
hiding the Fact, That I'm in love with you
scared to tell anyone because they might laugh
Now I’m not afraid to say that I’m in love
That you have stolen my heart
that you have taken my reasons
Now I don’t think in anything but...
Your eyes, how they pierce inside my soul
Your Hair, how it feels when I run my fingers through it
Your hands, how they feel when you touch me
Your touch, how it sends Shivers down my spine
Your lips, How they're so tender and so beautiful
Everything about you makes me realize what love really means
Every moment I keep on believing that you're my one and only
Every hour I hope that I'm yours
Everyday is not one without you
Every Night doesn't pass without hearing your voice
I’m not asking you for something special
All I'm asking for is My life Back
Since you've been in it
I haven't been myself
All I think about is you, you and you
Every time I see your face, I suffer
Thousands of tears cover me in my sadness
Cant you see that I’m nothing without you?
Cant you see that Every word and every try doesn’t matter if you’re not here?
Today I got to the reason of one thing
But nobody understands me
This night I promised
“I’ll wait for you till the end of my days”
“Till they cut all my ways”
“I’ll still be waiting for you”

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