I do think of you as I lay to sleep
With you on my mind, I know I can dream
Even though it has only been a short while
Spending time with no worry of what will be
You have been so great at bringing out my smile
You have been the best at making me happy
I found myself hypnotized by beauty
A slim, slender, gorgeous figure I crave
If you have doubt in your grace, I’ll show you fact
The form of an angel, wingless and bare
A smile and blue eyes God built to attract
I’d stop dead in my pace to catch your stare
Making you laugh was all that I needed
No task to daunting, I’d go to no end
Just seeing your joy would make my heart skip
To receive thankful eyes created great bliss
Adoring all affection from your lips
Reveling in each and every single kiss
I still dream now, even though you said no
Golden thoughts of you replay in my mind
To caress and cherish elegance so sweet
One more massage, one more kiss, one more embrace
To have one, would make me simper and complete
A single one would stretch delight across my face
Hoping that your fear would soon be a past
Fingers crossed, always wishing you to stay
Addicted to your affection; I humbly consent
Savoring each kind word and thoughtful gaze
Which I never truly believed to be innocent
Ending our beginning, after so few days
With heavy sighs concessions are made
Against my hearts judgment I did comply
Wondering if this is the last time I’ll see you
Wanting my instincts to be perfectly wrong
With faith and hopes high, I’ll be able to get through
Just please don’t discount my words or this song
Author notes
I dunno what this form would be called, all I know is each A/B line is 10 syllables and each CD rhyme is 11 syllables per line, and the rhyme scheme is ABCDCD in each stanza.
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Comments
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thats sweet and a real beautiful dedication... i loved the innocence pouring out of ur words....
good luck
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Good luck in my contest! i really enjoyed your poem/story. Valley Girl is right, it can be interpreted many different ways, and i think that is something that a good writer can do.
Kaycee
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Very creative write. I find that this poem can be interpreted in so many ways. Great imagery in this piece! Thanks for sharing, best of luck in the contest.
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Your name is Darcy.
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