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The Secrets of..

If we could let, let God's light shine through
I could be me
You could be you

If we bet on one sure thing
May it be on Christ risen
Because He is risen indeed

If we let our hearts be broken for Heaven's sake
It means we've let God overtake our wills and that we can let Him hold us still

If we choose to ride instead of drive to keep us alive
Love will be how He guides
If we run until we walk prepare to feel the fall
Either way we're flat on our face so we mind as well surrender all

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Written January 22, 2009

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    May 20, 2009

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    So glad

    I peeked around your poems & found this interesting write.
    I wouldn't bet on His truths 'cause He doesn't like gambling [usury] but we can count on The Christ being risen! Like the modern approach you have in this. In your last line you've got a typo:

    Either way we're flat on our face so we mind [might] as well surrender all ....we do need to have a changed mind in Him to surrender all to Him! Long day & need to


    • Emperor MAR
      May 21, 2009
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      i thought about changing mind as well to might as well when I was writing this, I decided to keep mind instead of might for some reason

      Thanks for the great comment