The waltz between silence
and the rhythmic beat of
feet
gently rapping the floor,
but now,
is nothing more.
Author notes
The title must be read before the poem is read, otherwise it wouldn't make sense D:.
Intended to capture the beauty of silence in a moment without cars or life.
It was as beautiful as your eyes.
De Arterian.
A contest entry
- 19 words by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended January 23, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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hmmm..... silence is nice sumtimes but wen it is too much it gets a lil bit awkward. it has to b silent at the right time to make the moment perfect.
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That can mean a lot in just that little verse.
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Okay wow....I lurve this It's like...so short...but it says so much. Bravo!!
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Silence is sometimes so very lovely.
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That is a lot to take in. Not because I'm stupid or anything. It is just hard to understand a moment of such calmness. You write it breathtakingly.
I don't think a moment like that would ever be as pretty as someone's eyes. ♥
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