I'll lift you from hell's grasps
i'll tear you from satan's fist
i'll kill your lonliness with a kiss
who's passions sends chills
i'd give my final breath
to seal my fate with you
i'd want to get to heaven
but i'd be lonely without you too
my love for you's a secret
its just between you & me
i'd be your own dirty little secret
if it wasn't for her, who makes you blue
your heart goes to another
your soul go toward her love
you mind in her direction
which leaves me alone in the dust
i'm left here in this dark shadow
as i struggle to pull you out
your stuck in a ditch too deep
& i'm not strong enough to pull you up
i've loved you since forever
as in 6th grade,year 06
the time seems to blow by
as the love carry,begins to flourish
A contest entry
- The last stage of any madness, thinkings, feelings, words and more and more by The.poet.of.hearts.
1665 points, ended February 5, 20 entries
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Your Heart,Guarded by Thorns
Theme 6.00
Idea 5.90
Emotions 6.40
Feelings 6.10
Words 5.00
Background 5.50
Title 7.00
Passion 6.20
Interest 5.90
Showing the Junoon 5.00
59.00
in this little age you have done alot, i do appreciate your work and your try in this piece, you are talented, and really fine
wish you all the best
keep writing
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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