with a kind smile
lays with him; yet
her hug curls her fingers
into my back
anxiously
Well?
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18 words chop one out and ill be back
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Chopped. ^_^
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Hmm, i really like the words used in this except one and it wasn't the one you chopped, i don't like the word greetings. Other than that i absolutly loved it. Thank you for entering.
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Upon review, I'll have to agree with you. Originally I was only looking at it through my perspective, as in I had only just met this individual. But it adds a whole new meaning with just one changed word. I'll edit it posthumously I suppose ^_^
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Oh thats a darn shame =( If you'd edited that word you'd have got a shiny =( sorry your one word wasn't one i liked xD love the rest of it now, *gives shiny trophy anyway*
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lol
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