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"Remembering dark yesteryears, but none repeating reruns,
through sickness and in health, carrying brother's burdens."
it's so true, 2008
yone who?
i mean, 2009
let's make it a-one
give no dog a bone
to all an ice cream cone
we can't undo what has been done
(hmmm, you don’t know who is YONE ?
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no more e-one
it's time to hang up the fone
no more yestersdays, they are gone
precision like a hone
walk among a field of ione
no more others do we jone
buy a dirt devil kone
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we are not a-lone
sing a new song like mone'
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none
ugly duckling no oone
(-Thet is oone-a ugly burd. by STOCKHOLM - SVERIGE Oct 27, 2003 )
are we to forever, each other pone
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to all no rone
serenity, quiet the sone
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together in peace we wone
xone, say what?
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and then pay it forward to every time zone
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Author notes
i was commenting on someone's work got the will to pen a new verse, and then from a-one to z-one, some free stuff, i decided to reverse, repeat last line / first line, and then etc. took over
how do you like it?
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sorry old lad...
...but I think it's a bag of shit!
So do your other readers, reading between the lines, but they haven't got the guts to say so!
R. -
Came here to return the favor
And read other poets comments - lol - the poem; it's a mind bender - have a great day - Joe --------------------------------------------------------------- keep on keeping on ----------------------------------------- cheers
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i never read one like yours, and it's a mind-juggling experience. not sure either what to make of your poem. maybe it is a cryptic message for your parents that they might understand what you're trying to say. lol. well, i don't know what else to say.
thanks for sharing.
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not sure what to make of such a creative piece. I didnt understand it tho, maybe there is some hidden message im not getting. its definitely original...no doubt about that. I actually found it quite amusing. At least it lifted my spirits, I have been reading some dark stuff lately and this brightened it up for me.
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UMMMMM ... This is very different.. I have never really seen anything like this.... I like it, but i didn't at the same time.. Keep penning. The more you write the more your own style will come out.
Cristy -
a beautifull nitted poem
we are not a-lone
sing a song
love -
a beautifull nitted poem
we are not a-lone
sing a song
love
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idk if i like this. the parts i can understand i like. but like someone else said there is alot that interupts this like the references and the incorrect spelling.
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it's time to hang up the fone
no more yestersdays, they are gone
haha, maybe use correct spelling.
this really interrupted the flow.
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I'm sorry, but I'm not sure if I like it... Subject starts out nice...
Te complete lack of rhythm throws it all off... I feels like you took a blog and broke up the lines... And the constant picture references are very distracting when reading... -
uhm...i'm not really sure i understand it. which doesn't mean it's bad, i promise...maybe after i re-read it a few times i'll get it. extremely creative, though.
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This is very interesting and well-written, if a bit long. I'm sure your parents would be very pleased if they read this. thank you for sharing.
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neat but...............
whatatangledwebweweave............
when
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neat but....
wepracticetodisbelieve!
I like to read others' comments... :-)
I enjoyed the creativiity in this piece, was like an email gone wrong! And in reading your notes there was definately a lot of time put into the researching here, sounds all too familiar! Can tell you had fun!
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