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Shackled To Death

The darkness surrounds
Deep underground
I lost the will to fight
Lost all my might

Chained to the ground
Not a soul to be found
I pray for death
Because nothing is left

An empty life
So full of stife
Couldn't have won
Lost before it had begun

I am shackled to this
Lost in the abyss
Forgotten forever
Not noticed ever

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prompt 7. Shackled

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  • xxBlackSnowFallxx
    September 12
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    Amazing

    That's how I feel a lot....Great Job


  • Paloszoo gold member
    January 27

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    Emotion just oozes through this finely written piece. Well done! Thanks for entering my contest. It's a pleasure to read your work!

  • loved it

    I feel like this all the time, i'm sorry that you feel that way too it sucks i hope you feel better, oh yeah the piece was really good though