The darkness surrounds
Deep underground
I lost the will to fight
Lost all my might
Chained to the ground
Not a soul to be found
I pray for death
Because nothing is left
An empty life
So full of stife
Couldn't have won
Lost before it had begun
I am shackled to this
Lost in the abyss
Forgotten forever
Not noticed ever
Author notes
prompt 7. Shackled
A contest entry
- Prompts Obondonza by Paloszoo.
575 points, ended February 5, 18 entries
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Comments
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Amazing
That's how I feel a lot....Great Job

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Emotion just oozes through this finely written piece. Well done! Thanks for entering my contest. It's a pleasure to read your work!

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loved it
I feel like this all the time, i'm sorry that you feel that way too it sucks i hope you feel better, oh yeah the piece was really good though




