eyes light the way through the darkness
love soft moss for tender feet to walk upon
kisses sooth the pain of life's trials
dreams soften harsh reality
oh how i need thee
A contest entry
- I Need You. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended January 24, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It's a very soft, soothing poem. I think the last line makes it, kinda brings it to an unexpectedly strong conclusion from the tranquility of the poem. I like it
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Thank you for your beautifully spoken entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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a beautiful and elegantly written piece, a talent that well deserves recognition
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Me too!
"oh how i need thee" Lovely and so very true and sincere from the heart!
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so beautiful........
honey this is wonderful. so soft & sultry. Well done.
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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beautiful
it made me feel the worlds are gentle and perfect. its wonderful how you capture such an overwhelming feeling in such few words. -
Sounds like love to me. What a wonderful job you did on this one! I love the softness of your words, and the picture it draws in my mind!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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