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Lasts An Eternity

Why do I love you
With a passion the way I do?
Why are my only thoughts
Of you?

You consume
Most of my day
I don't want it
Any other way

Everything I do
Focuses on you

I need you like the day
Needs the sun,
Or how the night
Needs the moon to shine up above

I need you like the earth
Needs the rain,
Or how a dreamer
Needs their dreams to attain

The love you pour out to me
Is what I need
Without that love
I wouldn't be able to dream,
To shine,
To carry out the love you give me,
A love that is mine

I want to give back to you
What you have given to me
And that is a love,
A true love
That lasts an eternity

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    January 24
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    Thank you for your beautifully spoken entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • I thought this was a cute & sweet poem. I loved it. It reminded me of my baby the whole time. Great write!


    • chasitylee
      January 22
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      haha thank you :]
      it reminds me of meh baby too :] ♥

      much love,
      Chasity♥