tears streaming,
body reeling,
mouth silent,
head screeming.
words of hate,
fuel your fate,
final sorry,
comes to late.
wasnt clever,
forgiven never,
goodbye love,
gone forever.
cried for hours,
tears like showers,
you send me,
a bunch of flowers.
not enough,
still feel rough,
you think you can
call my bluff.
days go by,
my tears run dry,
dnt have the strength
to say goodbye.
hate not forgot,
but you mean alot,
prove to me,
your worth a shot.
Author notes
based on recent events in my relationship with someone who blew his third chance. unfortunately i love him too much and am giving him another chance now that hes realised what a big mistake he made.
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dont know what to say...
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I liked your poem flows very well and comes from the heart..
thanks for sharing *hugs* ML
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thanks for the comment
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I liked it all, the flow was great the rhyme was right on. At first I thought the last stanza didn't quite work but in reading it again, it was my brain that wasn't working. Wonderfully done ;-)
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thankyou for commenting i did concentrate mainly on the ryme im glad you liked it
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cool
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