Dear Child,
Will you let me fill your mind with treasures and treats?
{Let me carve smiles into your face
Color your eyes with glittered crayons}
Come to me and let’s hide the truth
{Is this it
a M-A-S-K
Glued unwillingly to a damned face}
Soul and body lost
In a darkness
{No a Deftness of precision}
That cuts you away at the Intestines
Bloodshot eyes filled with
A crazed tempatation to go on
But forcing you to live
Future hitting you with lighting
{Roses weighing tons}
Pushing you down
Live damn it
Live
Live
{Live just this once}
Cries of redemption
Sighs of stupidity
Will this ever end?
“Masquerade my child
and happiness shall never reach you.”
Do it for me
Please be a critic about this, and tell me your thoughts or tell me how to make it better
Comments
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um wow
dizzy* confised* good poem strong words but huh? everythings all over the place
hey sis wats up hope your okay

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well done ! i can see and feel the emotion in this piece of art.. thanks you !

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Well thank you very much
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