Like the beauty of a blooming flower.
I need your love also to make me feel wanted. . .
To make me want to bloom for you
by
Giving all myself to you.
My love.
My sweet treasures of beauty.
My heart.
My life.
My sweet kisses of nectar and honey
All my desires to have and to hold you
These make my life one of Fantasy and Magic. . .
A dream like those found in Fairy Tales.
So treat me nice
and
You'll have my love forever.
dragonheart1
Author notes
prompt: "I need you"
picture form photobucket.com
A contest entry
- I Need You. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended January 24, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your beautifully spoken entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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I love the words you have used in this. My favorite part was the ending...
"So treat me nice
and
You'll have my love forever."
You deserve nothing but the best my friend. I wish you luck in love & life... ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Precious~
Oh My Word You have brought forth Heat in this piece with images to grab and tug at the Heartstrings Beautiful this is~ 
Love the line- so treat me nice
Excellent my Friend!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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wow
great job on this piece i love it so much i love the whole thing nothing to complain about keep iy up keep on going stay true sic peace out and have a nice day -
This was beautiful.. I hope your lover realizes how much you
care and cherishes you as you cherish her.
Thank you for sharing your heart.
Soulful Woman
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a beautiful take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa
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