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Defeated

Held up by rotting beliefs and hope
I know that I am going to fall
It's inevitable, and yet I still stand
Trying to be strong, I stand tall.

But I feel it coming, like a dreadful storm
It howls and shakes at my foundations
My collapse will, no doubt, be catastrophic
Like the ruinous fall of unshakable nations.

I used to be renowned, loved by all
Now, I'm just a crumbling mess
No one sees me, no one knows of me
It's hard to believe that I used to impress.

I look back on the life I used to have
I'd do anything to have it back again
To be happy and careless, it's my dream
But that's all that it'll ever be, for that was then.

I start to sway, broken and defeated
The end is now, there's no escape from this
With one last cry, I tumble and plunge
Melting into destruction's poisonous kiss.

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  • Shadow Stalker
    October 7

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    Very well done. I greatly enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing.

    *~*Shadow Stalker*~*


  • Ademon
    January 23
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    I was really impressed with the imagery given in this thank you for sharing!