Hanging my heart upon the stars
while swinging on a cloud,
I capture our love in golden balloons
as my wings are branded
with your memories
my tears play a melody.
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Beautiful background.
Love your opening line...
"Hanging my heart upon the stars"
I really enjoyed the read.
Very well done.
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great one had to come read some stupis christinas still out in maryland somewhere lol grrrrrr
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Love the back ground my favorite colors yeah !!! - now to your write it flows off the tip of your tongue effortlessly and is beautiful - a much pleasurable read
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Might just be the first one of your poems I've actually, truely, fully, enjoyed.
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I love it! You not only captured the imagery in a delightful way but this poem has a meter that is a joy to recite.
Love,
Amera♥
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Delicate beautiful words, the golden balloons just the stars, clouds, wings...just shows how fragile our emotions get. Blessings.
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Excellent on Two Counts!
This is so beautiful, Susan! What a perfect take on the picture prompt, one I don't think anyone could top. AND, you even designed a page with the picture. I like it. So, that means you went the extra mile for this contest and revealed two talents! That has to mean you get the GOLD! I should be the judge.
Luv & hugs, BonnieQ
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Oh wow..
I love this even more than the last!
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