She wants natural beauty,
but can't find it in herself.
She wants the perfect smile,
but can't paste it on an emotionless mask.
She wants the flawless body,
but her bones already rattle in the breeze.
She wants their love and affection,
but doesn't realize she already has it.
What did you think?
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I cant tell who this is about, it cant be about yourself because it doesnt make sense. either way i completely agree with your poem, its something that runs through everyone of us. no matter what we are or how we look we always critise ourselves. we may show no emotion to people, or act on these feelings, but everyone of us wants to be pretty, happy, attractive and loved. I appriciate and understand how your muse was inspired. im glad you're back and writing, you inspire my poetry.
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By dear wants perfection, but Ashlie, you already have it.
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I like itit made my blood feel warm
It caugh my attention except the foe the hideous. Who is the hideous -
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She feels that she is hideous. Hmm but now re-reading it doesn't make that much sense. Ty for picking it up
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