Sunsets caress against seams of death
as elegance grace the waters
buried pains thrash amongst the shore;
I step softly as my heart seeps into the sand
of forevers' destiny.
Author notes
10 Poets
30 Words
30 Minutes
Option #2
http://dianar87.deviantart.com/art/Seduced-By-The-Sun-83777797
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
925 points, ended January 23, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautifully written welcome back luv !!!!!!!!
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Wow what an amazing picture and background! You have captured the spirit of the picture so vividly. Such wonderful and raw emotion. Thanks for sharing, hugs Theresa
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Very WEll done Sissy Good Luck in the Contest
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"My heart seeps into the sand"
What wonderful imagery,..excellent take on the pic prompt.
Well done.
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This is such a beautiful imagery filled poem. I love the background. It's great to have you posting again.
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Wow. This is amazing
I was so caught up in the death and yet the rebirth found in new life in these words
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This is a beautiful write and the emotions are trully felt in this piece, i absolutely loved it, the host is going to have a hard time with all these amazing entries... best wishes!
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The last two lines are my favourites! This is gold for sure; well done & good luck to you
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this is a beautiful poem. you brought this image to life with your words. I really love the entire piece. sometimes when we have pain so deep inside of us, it comes out in many different ways. even ways we don't always expect.
good luck
kat
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Splendid animation with words. Really brought me into the image and the detailed emotion!
Best of Luck
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i can't do good bg's no more only got gimp it sucks Good luck me going to sleep I will read it in the morning
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