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The House That Guns Built

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A gun began this house’s tale, a very special gun.

The Henry Rifle was its name and gave Winchester’s son

A fortune that would be passed on, a legacy bizarre,

When fueled by Annie’s death that left a deep and lasting scar.

This Annie was the first-born child, the light of Sara’s eye.

Marasmus struck and stole that life, and naught could satisfy

The pain and sorrow Sarah felt, she, shattered and withdrawn;

Then Will’am died as TB struck, her everything was gone.

The seer sought to ease her grief, defining widow’s curse.

She’d head off t’ward the setting sun, before things got much worse.

The victims of those famous guns had cursed the family,

And so the widow traveled off toward that western sea.

So build, the seer said, just build, as wealth’s inheritor,

For if you stop, the curse will fall, and death will claim one more.

And so she bought and then she built from daily plans she drew,

As day and night the hammer sounds were all that mansion knew.

As rooms were added onto rooms with chaos everywhere,

Plus doors that led to sudden drops and thirteen treaded stairs.

Closets op’ning to blank walls and bathrooms with glass doors,

Thus over time it taller grew, and topped at seven floors.

’06 then came with tragedy, the earthquake felt by all.

The top four floors came crashing down, the house now not so tall.

Convinced the spirits caused the quake and plotted out her doom,

She vowed to n’er complete the house and boarded thirty rooms.

Increase, increase, the builders built, and then they built some more,

In mazes to confound the ghosts when nightly they’d explore.

With chimneys only halfway up and skylights in the floor,

And bedrooms scattered everywhere and windows by the score.

In 1922 at last, as night hung o’er the manse,

And Sarah’d left that special room, caught up in séance trance,

At eighty three the spirits came and fin’ly had their way,

And she was left with no more chance to see another day.

The myst’ry house with all those rooms, unfinished yet today

Attracts the folks who visit there outside of San Jose.

A flashlight tour is offered now, but just at Halloween.

You’ll see the myriad of rooms . . . if ghosts don’t intervene.

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  • Ishtar
    February 8

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    I feel that your family and mine should go camping together - I always found that my brothers had a really unique and talented streak where they could come up with any story and keep you engrossed for long periods of times. This talent was very apparent during out camping trip and plan rides.

    I think you're kind of like that. You have such interesting tales to tell and better yet, you tell it in poetry.

    Love,
    GD Jealous as hell Reni.


  • queenie
    January 28

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    yes, i look the houses [poem stories. well i sure loved this one. i saw a movie that told a tale like this. your words made me see all that was happening. the story unfolds and up until her death everything is made clear. loved this so much. very informative and the tone is set to a very accomplished story-teller's beat. this is a winner that's for sure.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    January 26

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    Terrific! You did a great job of
    researching this house. You have
    a wonderful way with words. Very
    well done. Thanks for entering,
    and good luck.


  • dustookie2
    January 23

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    This is an interesting saga and turn of events.....was it some cursed revenge of lost souls or someone playing with the emotions of a woman suffering sorrow and pain of her own lost family. You pen the story well. Hope she finally found her inner peace. Good luck in the contest.


  • KevinDunn
    January 23
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    Very interesting!


  • suseann
    January 22

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    Awh,a strange bird was she! And you expose her unwarrented guilt and fears here rather well. I watched Taps Ghost Hunters episode of this place. Not much happened. But I can't help but wonder if that astrologer or who ever she/he was. Didn't have a hidden agenda because of someone she'd lost to the guns herself.

    But....I suppose the sessions paid pretty well anyway. Shameful to play with a tormented mind like that.

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