It's time for me to go
I'm mortal you know
But I'm okay to die
becuase there's a place way up in the sky
where only angels can fly
It's a place that I'll be able to spread my wings
as the wind in my face sings
It'll be the song of those gone
and waiting for loved ones to carry on
The words are hard to hear
but it says it'll be ok I have no pain to fear
The darkness is gone
and I am once again whole and strong
My only wish is for those I love to know I'm not gone
for in there hearts I live on and on
Tears will fall but they will dry
because those that know me
see that I'm an angel flying high
watching over them
forever
til we meet again
I love you all amen.
Author notes
Its about death in a way. (so 3?)
its for my baby boy. <3 love you. forever in my heart
A contest entry
- the last seven days of your life by Kiss the girl--x.
875 points, ended March 6, 2009, 26 entries
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He was one heck of a horse. He was an ass, but I'm still guna miss him. He was fun to ride and I was always hopin i would get to ride him a barrel pattern one day. I remember the first time i rode him. I was scared ta death of him then i got on and he was awsome. Erin's right this is so him. great write manda
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hell yea he was. he was an evil mother fucker but he had a heart like no other. it was the rebel baby in hi I guess. damn rebello males lol. Ill tell you what? that big barrel race we have in the sky when I die? you can run scorch. deal?...
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Deal. And then you can ride sage and me and Scorch we' ll kick your butts(well maybe not lol)
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RAYYYYYYY i just realized my default pic on here is scorch ):
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hahaha naw K-dog will enter sage and reba and by then prolly WON-Ton. I'll take dan the man and smoke yer asses by half a second! THEN I will enter Jill and come back out and as always with a girl with class she'll beat her boyfriend by just a little...lmao....
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lol prolly. but i call a ride danny lol
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lol hell yea. you can bet on it. haha ok ok you can have a ride on him. I guess if we're in heaven he cant kill you twice. lol jk jk ray
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HEEEEY lol i may not be the best at staying on, and im not that easy to get off. but you can bet that i'll keep gettin back n till i do stay on lol
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dide relax that was not a dig at you. it took ME 3 years to get where I didnt get my ass dumped in the dirt every other time I rode him... hes a hard one... ;o
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oh i know lol sa'll good. I'd prolly get my ass killed if i tryed to ride that horse lol mayb
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lol the only way to survive is get back up! like the half way to hazard song
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this is AMAZING!! its so him. i can just see him runnin around in heaven bein a dink and dancing. and of course causin trouble. lol he was amazing. im guna miss him like crazy.
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lol ues it is. I wrote it that night. Tuesday. Holy shit its been a week tomorrow. Ive been cryin this whole period and I jsut started again. Damn. I found pics of nick on the O drive and i read somethina bout him and i just lost it and now that. But yer here now so Ill quit.
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