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Next Time

The amber lights will flicker
Shining brilliantly on you
My heart will beat so much quicker
If our lustful emotions are true

My lips will draw painfully close
Your breasts will radiate hot sin
The combined heat will start to toast
Our waiting and anxious skin

Before we blissfully kiss
Our eyes will forever meet
Eternal memory of bliss
Your lips will taste devilishly sweet

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yeah luciferschild

written about my ex gf

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  • Erozay
    January 26
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    its good


  • Anu-Nataraj
    January 26
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    good luck in the contest !

    nice wrtie :


  • allygirl87
    January 22

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    this was a beautiful poem, but i dont see the connection it has to angels.... if youcan add that to the poem maybe....

    but it was a good write....
    thanks for entering