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Shattered

My heart is breaking
My love has died
Dreams we were making
Oh how she lied
When you believe in love
Love is all you see
And like a glove
It fits so snugly
But you can’t be blind forever
And love must be two way
A moment that will ever
Make me pay.

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  • whitenoise
    January 22

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    heartbreak flows through this, such a sad read, the rhyme is gentle and smooth
    beautiful
    white