Like a flower’s opening splendour
Or a butterfly landing on one’s palm
Like a puppy falling asleep on a lap
Or a surprising hug from a child
Like a rainbow appearing before the eyes
Or a sunset mirrored by silent still water
Like all the stars gleaming above
So it feels when you say I love you.
A contest entry
- What You Want by fairytalelovestory.
725 points, ended January 22, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - pif/round contest part one - prewrite's by serenity silvermoon.
800 points, ended July 10, 564 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i love it i want to make a special background for this one if you will let me. you poem was very sweet. please let me know if i can do a background for it. thanks for sharing good luck in the contest
love you sister: Dianna -
very sweet and warm
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AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! This is so incredibly sweet big brother! You can melt hearts with your words!
♥ Kathraina
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