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Dragons Eggs...

I stumbled on them quite by chance
I didnt really have a clue
They looked to me like dragons eggs
I wasnt sure what to do

I called the local expert
He came and took a look
He didnt seem all that impressed
But couldnt find them in his book

I put them in my haversack
Didnt want to leave them lying
What if they hatched out in the night
Then decided to go flying

I took them home to keep them safe
Well you never know these days
I set them on a rolled up towel
The way a chicken lays

I took a few little pictures
Then went to the local museum
I showed them to the curator
He said hed have to see them

When he saw them how he laughed
He said..son they're only rocks
They were polished by the wind and rain
You can put them in this box

I took them home that afternoon
On the towel I let them lay
I still believe they're dragons eggs
I'm sure they'll hatch one day

Please tell me what you think

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  • Life is a Beach gold member
    January 22, 2009

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    lol! This is the cutest tale told in poem form. I agree with Nyetta...perfect in a childs book of poetry.


  • StarEyes
    January 22, 2009

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    Dad,

    This is great! I love it! Hope you are watching them closely, wouldn't want them to disappear on you Oh what a fun read!

    I love it... Children's book maybe?

    and love

    Nyetta


    • Celticpoet
      January 22, 2009

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      Thanks Nyetta

      Im not sure my writes are quite that good..to be part of a childs book!...most of my writes are purely based on my interpretation of the images I use to illustrate...but if folks enjoy the read then Im happy with that xx love n hugs Dad xx


      • StarEyes
        January 22, 2009
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        Ok, Dad, it is two to one, you lose! Even my son said this is perfect for a children's book And yes are good enough for that! I would love to put one together from some of your writings for my grandsons! You are amazing when it comes to writing!

        Love you

        Nyetta


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    January 21, 2009

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    LOL! This is so cute!
    I love your thoughts on this picture Dan.
    Very creative and I do hope that they hatch
    for you one day! Hey, who knows? You could
    be a millionaire! hehe Thanks for sharing this!




    Jeremy0826

  • Nobodysboy
    January 21, 2009
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    excellent !

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